Rain -An Awakening
October 9, 2007
Clouds begin to gather displaying the magnificent hues of grey and white…..
Sun feels extinct…
Wind begin to sway the trees to a rhythmic beat
Drops of heaven begin to descend …
Aroma assimilates the air and emotions begin to tend
Latched n hidden thoughts begin to unravel
As Eyes begin to well, and sentiments begin to flow
Drops begin to gather into my fist a flow
And then I sink back into a dreamy world
Where everything in a swirl
Ex- beaus, old friends memories of past begin to comprehend
Words said unsaid apprehend
Times we met, Times we fought
And times when we just hung-out a lot
Of all those times we chatted and feasted
And now all those relations are left astray
Voices from far approaching me
Tearing me apart between known- unknown
Past was sweet fun and gay
Present tis here real n cliché
Wondering where I am left now……….
In the light of yesterday today I conceive tomorrow…..
beautifully written…this is one poem which i guess every single person can relate to in some way and felt the same way at some point in their lives…tanvi has actually penned down everyone’s thoughts in a very beautiful way….
jhakaas e boss!
great work….tanvi has got some beautiful meaning out through words.
a very sentimental piece on life as i think about it. you really get the picture about it…very admiring work…
good job !!
Shrutiii…thks for the 1st comment on my 1st ever blog!![:O]
hope i pen down many more such poems…which relate to every1 in general……..coz u cant pen down anything ..tht u haven’t experienced ur self!!!!![:D]
Hey buddy..
Woooaaaaahhh….:-O
never knew u cld write so well…..m surprised….rather shocked!
thts 1 awesome poem u have written huh!!
gr8 going……keep up the good work..!
good going tanvi… keep it up..
till now i thought that tanvi can only go on doing blah blah…. but try giving her a pen and i think she is too gud at it..
A wonderful poem.. is this the other side??
ever since v r together havnt heard dat she writes.. but she does it.. i mean in a better way..
awesome poem.. all the best..
hope to get many more of these..
Excellent Poem!!!!!!!!!!!Thoughts or truth of life converted into beautiful words and that too in poetic manner!!!!!!
Till now i knew that tanvi can give good voice to lyrics written by somebody else and composed by somebody but now i came to know that she can write too and that also in good manner.
keep it up and expecting hindi poem written,composed and sung by u soon!!!!!Best luck for that.
Simply Wonderful! These words touches heart… Very nice…
Dats a really beautiful poem..never knew tht u were so poetic …well done sis…its got really deep meaning 2 it..i m proud of u…i m waiting for more
Luv ya
पहिल्या प्रयत्नात, पद्य रचना जमलेली आहे.
अशाच प्रकारे, आपल्या भावनांना वाट करून द्यावी.
आमच्यासारखे रसिकांना बरे वाटेल.
Under which ‘thing’ were you at the time of the ‘Awakening’ ?
thk u allll for those wonderful comments..!
yeah i too did nt know tht i had it me :O …..until one fine day…. i started and this is the final product!!
….quite good! huh!
Excellent Poem!!!!!
really nice
It’s really good. we can imagin a picutre while reading the poem. Good one!
hey!
thk u ashwini and aditya….
u guyz actually checked out my blog..! :O
do keep coming bk..I hope to update it soon…nt with a poem this time bt a small story!!
nice work gal….
keep goin….
really dint know u write tat great…..
gud luck 4 future…..
A thought which is on every one’s mind, its all ways there some where in an individuals unconscious mind. u know something, tanvi u have taken me back to those days, which have always been and i would love to have them bk with me.
Cheers to this sweet poem![:)]
Hi
very nice written..
BR
Mahesh Kale
wowwww
im just speechless
gr8
i will give my comments later on coz rt now i hv got no words
i just cant believe it
superb tanvi.. felt like i was back to school,, reading poems, reminding me of all the good old memories..sagle tase visualize kele jase lihilay